We were learning about, training for the triathlon so we were ready and knew what we were doing on the really day. Knowing how much laps of running, biking or swimming we had to do so we didnt mess up.
I found it easy to, put everything I did at the triathalon because I could remember what I did step by step of the way. To tell the reader what types of thing I did at the triathlon and each thing everyone else was doing,
I found it challenging to, put more paragraphs in my writing and Add more planning so it could be more rich. To have less boring words so it can paint a really good detailed picture in the readers mind.
Next time I will, try to challenge myself and do more rich words and more tence in my writing next time I write. Also paint a picture in my own head so I know it will paint a picture it someone elses head too like, one of my friends, family, other people from different place or just anyone.
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