Our class was reading a book called the beginning and our teachers said that we should make an E book about the book. So this is what me and my cooperative group made about the book rangi and papa/The beginning.
I hope you like what me and my cooperative group made, let me know if it is good or bad.
We were making poi's and it was my first time making one myself and it turned out goooodd. I hope you like my story and yes it is a true story I made a poi but I had a bit of help from my mum at school.
Next time I will try to show you my poi and post it on my blog I might do that in the school holidays when im at home on my chromebook, just saying I cant use a poi. Im bad at using poi's but my nana knows how to use them so she could teach me how to use poi's on day but she said to me im not that good anymore at using them poi's and then I started to laugh a bit. You want to know why I started to laugh a bit. Because she said im not good at using THEM poi's.
Please comment if you like my writing or if you think I need to add something to it because i can change it. Hope you like my writing and please give me feed back on my writing I would like to know if it is bad or good.
Today we were learning how to write persuasive writing about how the Enviroment is our resonsibility and we were trying to convince our writing teacher/Mrs Gomm that the Enviroment is our resonsibility. When I was searching thing about the plastic on google and kiddle I found some sad things about the sea animals.
When I write something like this again, I will try to have more writing and sentences in my next peace of writing I do about something persuasive.
Always put rubbish in the rubbish bin so it doesnt go in the ocean and kill sea animal or the animals in the wild.
I got some of my reasons and my ideas from the trips that I have gone on and I got some ideas from websites that you will see in my bibliography bellow.
When I first started persuasive writing I was pretty bad but I practiced and got better at it. This is problaby my best persuasive writing I have done so far this year. So I hope to get even better at persuasive writing next year and when I do it in like highschool I hope I get even better at writing a persuasive writing peace.
I hope you enjoy reading my writing and if you did I hope you liked it. Thank you for understanding and reading my writing. Thank you. Made by Sophie In Team Toroa Awapuni School Gisborne.😁
We were learning about to write our own podcast wit our buddy from our coopertive group.
I found it easy to talk when it my part in my podcast well doing manaiakalani.
I found it challenging to talk a lot of words in my buddies podcast because I had to say so much words and to get my one finished because I hadnt finished my one in time. So I had to do it the next week which is this week and I finished it just in time.
Next time I will focus more and not talk to my buddy as much as i did doing this podcast oh and the podcast was about what our hobbies were.
We were learning about how to write reports properly and how to teach our family how to write reports.
I found it easy to write a report about the Chinese New Year and talking about their colture.
I found it challenging to get it posted on my blog on time because I was stressed and in a hurry.
Next time I will focus more on my work and try to get it posted on my blog on time.
We were learning about how to write persausive writing to convince people to ban milk from schools.
I found it easy to write persausive writing to make people want to ban school milk from school.
I found it challenging to write lots of writing to convince people to ban milk from schools but not all school.
Next time I will write way more writing to try to convince a lot more people to ban milk from school.
We were learning about how to make a E book on a google slide with our group about how to do... on scratch.
I found it easy to make a scratch game on how to show people how to make there sprite talk and ask questions.
I found it challenging to talk about the thing I was going to teach you and focusing because my class mates were around me.
Next time I will add more stuff to my slide and video and maybe talk about more stuff on scratch.
