We were learning about how to write persausive writing to convince people to ban milk from schools.
I found it easy to write persausive writing to make people want to ban school milk from school.
I found it challenging to write lots of writing to convince people to ban milk from schools but not all school.
Next time I will write way more writing to try to convince a lot more people to ban milk from school.
hi sophie my name is mahanga and i am in base class 1 and i like the whay you sead we should ban milk @awapuni.school.and then you sead that cen you undestand what mil dase to as.
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Hi mahanga My name is Sophie, thank you for your message about my peace of writing why school milk should be banned. I can really read what you are saying in the message you said to me but I can read some of it. Thank you for your feedback about my writing why we should ban milk from school. From Sophie In base class Three/3
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