Today we were learning how to write persuasive writing about how the Enviroment is our resonsibility and we were trying to convince our writing teacher/Mrs Gomm that the Enviroment is our resonsibility. When I was searching thing about the plastic on google and kiddle I found some sad things about the sea animals.
When I write something like this again, I will try to have more writing and sentences in my next peace of writing I do about something persuasive.
Always put rubbish in the rubbish bin so it doesnt go in the ocean and kill sea animal or the animals in the wild.
I got some of my reasons and my ideas from the trips that I have gone on and I got some ideas from websites that you will see in my bibliography bellow.
When I first started persuasive writing I was pretty bad but I practiced and got better at it. This is problaby my best persuasive writing I have done so far this year. So I hope to get even better at persuasive writing next year and when I do it in like highschool I hope I get even better at writing a persuasive writing peace.
I hope you enjoy reading my writing and if you did I hope you liked it. Thank you for understanding and reading my writing. Thank you. Made by Sophie In Team Toroa Awapuni School Gisborne.😁
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