We were making poi's and it was my first time making one myself and it turned out goooodd. I hope you like my story and yes it is a true story I made a poi but I had a bit of help from my mum at school.
Next time I will try to show you my poi and post it on my blog I might do that in the school holidays when im at home on my chromebook, just saying I cant use a poi. Im bad at using poi's but my nana knows how to use them so she could teach me how to use poi's on day but she said to me im not that good anymore at using them poi's and then I started to laugh a bit. You want to know why I started to laugh a bit. Because she said im not good at using THEM poi's.
Please comment if you like my writing or if you think I need to add something to it because i can change it. Hope you like my writing and please give me feed back on my writing I would like to know if it is bad or good.
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